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It is Still Uphill by ~cursed-one:iconcursed-one:

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I still keep on walking,
And my route’s still uphill
But my path is clearer;
The stream cutting my rout.
It glistens and sparkles,
It dances in the sun.
Gives life to white flowers,
Where once was gray and dull.
It gives motivation,
And a bounce in my step.

Water tastes of goodness,
It fills up my body,
Energy runs through me,
And it pushes me on.

When the heat of the sun  
Makes my vision fussy,
I can rest in the shade;
The water cools my feet.
And on again I go
With a smile on my face.

I still keep on walking,
And my routs still uphill.
©2009-2010 ~cursed-one
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Author's Comments

This is quite a long poem for me and I wrote it over a couple of days which is also unsauwel for me

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~abridgewater Jan 28, 2009, 11:35:57 AM
luv, that was lovely. i like the bit about the smile on your face best

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Kinda dumb and kinda smart and I loved her so"
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~Franko-el-random Jan 31, 2009, 4:19:32 AM
love it :D

sorry i havnt been on in ages
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~cursed-one Mar 20, 2009, 9:56:14 AM
well i'm now even more sorry. thankyou. Put some more stuff on. I've looked through you're stuff to see if there was any.
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~Franko-el-random Mar 23, 2009, 12:56:07 AM
Hmmmmmm......... there could be a chance of a sonnet about vampires in the near future :)

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~cursed-one Mar 25, 2009, 11:33:17 AM
I'll give it a try. Not usaly my sort of this so it should be intresting to do but i wont make any promeses about the quality
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~Franko-el-random Mar 25, 2009, 1:26:37 PM
nonononono, from me a charlotte requested one earlier this month

silly bob :)

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